I contemplate the world
outside my window
through wooden, white blinds.
Sometimes,
while working
at my desk,
the world passes by,
unnoticed.
Sometimes,
I catch a glimpse of
cars, delivery trucks, and buses.
Sometimes,
walkers extend
their walk
by turning onto my cul-de-sac.
Sometimes,
neighbors gather
and chat.
Most of the time,
there’s not much to see
unless
you stop to notice
a breeze disturbing tree limbs,
birds tending to the business of survival,
shadows creeping
along the sidewalk
as the hours pass.
I watch the world
outside my window
through wooden, white blinds.
Me too!!!! Loved your collaboration between your words and images… saving the white wood blinds for the very end… I’m there with you 🙂
I Agree with@jarhartz comment !
You make the ordinary a celebration! Oh, the stories I could tell about the world outside my windows. Thanks for the glimpse from your mind’s eye!
This piece made me smile, a positive spin on what I sometimes think are the dreaded blinds when it comes time to clean them.
I love shadows creeping along the sidewalk! There is something fun about actually have been in that spot in your house. Though visiting with you limited my observations through the wooden, white blinds and I wouldn’t want it any other way!😉
Love the phoetry … and all that you notice outside your wooden white blinds. Funny all the snapshots of neighbors gathering and people walking by — I wonder if they saw you snapping pictures … if only they knew it was for a slice! Beautiful words and photos!
Oh my goodness, did I love this! The photos, the words, the ideas. How often do we all make similar observations and they just slip away. And how much we miss, too, when we don’t take the time to observe and think. And “phoetry.” You must copyright that!
Oh how I long to linger and look out my window through my wooden blinds! Beautiful phoetry!
So true Elsie. How much of life to we miss by being so busy. I love white wooden blinds too!!
Reminds me of my kitchen patio door but a lot of nature instead.
I always love your phoetry! I was thinking about all the little details I pass everyday while I was driving home last night. I wish I had stopped to take some pictures!
Great insights on your outside view. This form is delightful, too.
I am totally using this idea! I totally think this would be a great way to get our kids writing in a fun way. Thank you for this idea.
I love your ‘phoetry!’ So much goes on in the world that we just need to take time to notice.
Love this phoetry featuring the view through the blinds. I even love the blind shadows on the pics. Thanks for watching your world & sharing it with us.
Poetry through the window blinds- a unique perspective. I have a window I like to look through, too.
I love the observations — so meaningful — and I LOVE the descriptions!
Stopping to notice is a delicious treat we can reward ourselves with anytime…thanks for your through-the-blinds noticing.
I love the repetition hiding in your piece! It drew me in a felt like I was leaning closer, peering through your wooden blinds to see what you were seeing. The pictures really added to your descriptions. Loved this!
I always enjoy your phoetry – the joyful synergy of words and photos.
It’s so nice to just sit and notice and wonder about the world around you. I like how you’ve taken the time to be mindful and put your noticings into words.
There really is a lot happening if we just take the time to observe what is right in front of us. Really like this format, your pictures and poetry. You perfectly captured life just happening.
What a lovely celebration of what you see outside your window. Wonderful set of photos
It’s those small things in our lives that make life so interesting, even if it seems mundate. Love your phoetry. Your words help to capture what the pictures show.
Nice that you shared the ‘scenery’, Elsie. I don’t have the view at the front except from my kitchen, but at the back, squirrels and rabbits (as you know).
Always love your beautiful photos! Your poem is framed so nicely with the bookend beginning and ending and you have created a wonderfully calm tone. Phoetry – great term!
I love how you created phoetry and will have to experiment with this in a slice! What a great idea!
What a beautiful way to capture the ordinary. There truly is something to write about in every moment.
I love this! What a lovely idea to capture simple moments and then write about them. Phoetry! Love it. And I think it’s so beautiful how you have arranged the images and the words. I feel like I’m sitting at your window with you.
So true. I need to take some time to notice my surrounding.
This was such a pleasant place to stop this morning. Like I was sitting next to you looking outside your window. The repeated line frames the poem like a window.
The repetition in your poem works really well, both at the beginning and the end, as well as in the middle. Love the images, too!
Not much to notice until you notice. What a perfect slice. You masterfully took me to your neighborhood. Spying on all the wonders that wall by your window.