Have you ever seen the poetry book Lemonade and Other Poems Squeezed from a Single Word by Bob Raczka?
Inside the front cover it says, “Play with your words! Part anagram, part rebus, part riddle – this brand new poetic form turns word puzzles into poetry. Using only the letters from a single word, each of the of poems in this collection capture a scene from daily life and present a puzzle to solve.”
Here is an example: flowers
we
slow
for
free
wows
I love these poems! They speak so eloquently with so few letters as choices to create an image with the words.
It is so much harder than it looks. I thought, I will anagram the word and have words to choose from to create my own. Not so simple, because I can use a letter as many times as I need it. So now I have to look at my letters and think about words in a different way. On this final Poetry Friday of the SOLC, I offer my attempts to squeeze a poem from a single word.
Comments
Some notes
come to
ME!
And one more try:
writers
is it
trite
wit
i
write?
it is.
This is awesome! I love the poems you created. I think I will introduce this form to my students when we start our poetry unit soon! 🙂
I like that!
What wonderful poems! Thanks for the book and writing idea. Love it!
Very cool! I’ll have to try these and get the book.
The only thing more brilliant than the idea itself are your poems! Fantastic! Will have to try this one, myself and with kids. Thanks, Elsie! 🙂
Oh my the two you wrote were wonderful! I have my quickwrite for my college students on Tuesday…I can hear the groans and then the celebrations!
ooh those are neat! I loved the two you came up with — so cute, especially the “writers” one! Looks really hard… maybe I’ll try one sometime though! 🙂
You sure make it look easy! They would publish yours for sure. I love this idea. Thanks for sharing!
Sounds like a fun way to write a poem. I’ll put it in my book for a later slice! Thanks for sharing.
I’m glad that you played and shared the poems with us.
Terje
I remember trying this last year . . . and I remember it was quite tricky! I’m going to go back and check it out now. Here’s my link: http://literacyzone.blogspot.com/2011/04/sol-writing-slices.html
So glad you gave it a squeeze! Quite clever and fun!
What a fun idea! I’ve never seen this book but it is now on my list of “someday I need to buy…” books. I think this could be a fun making words lesson with my kindergarten kids. Make words and then use your words to make poetry! Thanks for the new form and ideas! I enjoyed your poems…the writing poem is pretty fun!
I do have this book, Elsie-It is wonderful & I had such fun doing it with some older students last year. It’s hard! But worth it. I love both your poems, but especially number two, about writers! Thank you for a wonderful idea to share before April!
These are hard to write at least I thought so when I tried. I wonder if people have had kids do them and to what success. Your second poem made me laugh. Both are clever.
How clever is this. I’m glad it’s Friday and poetry day. I’m on my way to work at a library book fair sale. There will words all around me. Thanks for another challenge.
Oh my, another poetry challenge (my entry today was one!) This one looks fun.
I had to laugh when I tried this one:
Poetry –
Try
to
type
prety
It’s first grade spelling!
Oh, no! Oh, YES! I love, love, love, love…did I say love?…love these!!!
Must try one immediately…no more reading posts. Hey, everyone, you can thank Elsie for this! I was going to read more, but I have to go now.
Oh, and you wrote a couple fantastic ones! Splendid! And by the way splendid doesn’t work well for one, that I can figure anyway. Sip, did, end, pen, lip…nope.
Oh, I want to make lemonade today. Thank you for writing about new forms.
Strawberries.
raw
is
best